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Tuesday, March 29, 2011

Gone


I woke this morning
turned to embrace
but you were
gone

where are you my
sweet
my darling one
gone

you have left me
bereft without counsel
without cause, just
gone

i reach out
in vain hope
to touch skin again
gone

I am inspired to try and write by Heather, she is truly a fabulous writer
and she takes part in 5 Minute Fridays...check out what she achieves!!! This is my scribbling from this morning, a couple of minutes writing, no editing, just as it is.

TK xx

8 comments:

  1. beautiful TK, absolutely beautiful.
    unedited is always good ♥

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  2. Oh TK that is absolutely beautiful! :)

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  3. I love to read your writings!

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  4. So lovely - thank you!

    I have been enjoying getting back into writing - albeit assignments. Miss G is learning about poetry at school - it reminded me how much I love it - amazing how we forget who we are after kids (me having 3 anyway)!

    Thank you again
    Rach xo

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  5. oh this is lovely, so raw, unedited is best. Thank you for sharing your lovely talent.

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  6. Tiffany, this is beautiful! Thank you for your sweet words! I have an award for you on my site!

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  7. Beautiful. The five minute concept is very good too!

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  8. My dearest friend TK......this piece has a sense of earthly openess & vulnerability to it which is unique & beautiful.....like you! You are so gifted :-)

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Thankyou for blessing me by stopping by my little blog - I always appreciate your comments TK xx